The shot of the image on the front cover is very clear and fits into the educational theme of the magazine. I also like the masthead as it is large and clear and has been written in a suitable font for the target audience. The coverlines, barcode, HQ code are all conventional and have been included on the front cover. The issue number and dates are conventional features and have been included.
To improve: You can add more cover lines and can match the colour scheme of the masthead with the cover lines.
Contents page: I like the use of your columns, it gives it a structured look and is conventional to a contents page. You have kept the house style as the colours you had on your front cover match the colours on the contents page. I like how you have separated the different sections of the contents and the use of conventional images.
To improve: Fill up the contents page more e.g. with editors letter, making the images larger etc.
I think the consistency of the house style is very good which makes a good impression on the audience, it also shows good consistency in the contents page throughout. The cover lines are short and snappy and very suitable for a college magazine - the font also makes it standout and remains clear up throughout the cover page and contents.
I like the layout of the contents as it looks well organised. everything seems to be included including images, i like that me and zak are also in one of them... for improvements, fill up certain empty spaces
The shot of the image on the front cover is very clear and fits into the educational theme of the magazine. I also like the masthead as it is large and clear and has been written in a suitable font for the target audience. The coverlines, barcode, HQ code are all conventional and have been included on the front cover. The issue number and dates are conventional features and have been included.
ReplyDeleteTo improve: You can add more cover lines and can match the colour scheme of the masthead with the cover lines.
Contents page: I like the use of your columns, it gives it a structured look and is conventional to a contents page. You have kept the house style as the colours you had on your front cover match the colours on the contents page. I like how you have separated the different sections of the contents and the use of conventional images.
ReplyDeleteTo improve: Fill up the contents page more e.g. with editors letter, making the images larger etc.
I think the consistency of the house style is very good which makes a good impression on the audience, it also shows good consistency in the contents page throughout. The cover lines are short and snappy and very suitable for a college magazine - the font also makes it standout and remains clear up throughout the cover page and contents.
ReplyDeleteI like the layout of the contents as it looks well organised. everything seems to be included including images, i like that me and zak are also in one of them...
for improvements, fill up certain empty spaces